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Kassi Wilson's avatar

Aaron, the tonality and cadence of your poem reminds me of William Wordsworth's Daffodils. Beautifully done. Thank you for sharing your work with us.

Corie Feiner's avatar

I love a good rhyming couplet of a poem! Thank you!

Aaron Sun's avatar

Thanks so much for reading Corie!

Corie Feiner's avatar

Of course! My pleasure.