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Kassi Wilson's avatar

Maya! Your poem is lovely. I canโ€™t read your poem without crying. It hits home, as a mom with pre-teen and teenage sons.

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Ahh, thank you, Kassi. ๐Ÿ™ Greatly appreciate your kind words and the opportunity to be featured!

Poetry Tracks In the Snow's avatar

Such a lovely nod to snow and the innocence of childhood. ๐Ÿค๐Ÿค๐Ÿค

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Thanks Holly! ๐Ÿ™

Rachel Lynne Sakashita's avatar

What a unique perspective! I was wondering who the speaker was and was delighted when I understood. ๐Ÿค Lovely!!

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Thank you so much, Rachel!

Gopal's avatar

So delightful ! Beautifully penned

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Thank you, Gopal!

Rosa Lรญa Gilbert's avatar

This is so beautiful, Maya. The tenderness in the words but also the images are so vivid!

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Thank you, Rosa! So glad this poem resonated with you :)

devika's avatar

ahh love this one! very nostalgic and perfectly captures the feeling of waking up and seeing snow outside your window as a kid

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Thank you for your kind words!

Timeless Muse's avatar

That's beautiful. So tangible.

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Thank you, Yorlene!

Ella annห™หšโญ’ห–๏ฝฅ's avatar

Such grace in your words, loved this!!

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Ella Ann, thank you!

Corie Feiner's avatar

โ€œYou made angels out of me. โ€œ - I love this line!

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Thank you, Corie :)

Kim Williams, M.Div.'s avatar

This brings back memoriesโ€ฆ thank you. Delightfully sweet

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Thank you, Kim ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฝ