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Kassi Wilson's avatar

Thank you Bethany for sharing your poem with us today! I love the enthusiasm and imagery!

Bethany J. Riddle's avatar

Thank you Kassi!

Andy Smith's avatar

Beautiful, Bethany! I love the turn in the center that brings more of the uncertainty into the moment.

Bethany J. Riddle's avatar

Thank you Andy!

Poetry Outdoors's avatar

This is my favorite part of the poem too! The power of that “sometimes” and not knowing what comes next. Beautiful poem, Bethany! 🌱

Corie Feiner's avatar

Love this line, “To hold a life. To hold this life.”

Bethany J. Riddle's avatar

Thank you. Me too. 😊

Allison Moore's avatar

Beautiful!

Denise T Drapeau's avatar

Beautiful, touching words!

Bethany J. Riddle's avatar

Thank you Denise!