I love winter, Rachel, and your poem captures its beauty. Winter as a Sabbath in the cycle of growth is a lovely idea, and you have made the imagery so accessible it does all the work of communicating that idea. I love how the brightness normally in the title is found in the last sentence.
Thank you dearly, Abigail!! I am SO glad the imagery is working for you. And thank you for your comment about the title and last line—that was my goal. 🙏🏻🙏🏻
Thank you for stating your poem here Rachel! I feel the serenity in every line. 🙏🏻
Thank you both so much!! So excited to be able to collab in this way ☺️🤍
Same here! Feel free to restack your poem in your notes feed, more people will see it.
I do as well !!! Awesome poem !!🥰🥰
Powerful last line. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you so much for reading!!
Beautiful x
Thanks so much!!
I love winter, Rachel, and your poem captures its beauty. Winter as a Sabbath in the cycle of growth is a lovely idea, and you have made the imagery so accessible it does all the work of communicating that idea. I love how the brightness normally in the title is found in the last sentence.
Thank you dearly, Abigail!! I am SO glad the imagery is working for you. And thank you for your comment about the title and last line—that was my goal. 🙏🏻🙏🏻
Beautifully executed, Rachel!
❄️🙏🏻